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Deidara poem

Post by FirzenSK on October 9th 2013, 7:55 am

My work, I hope you like it.

I love the boom,
boom is my doom,
everything in my room
is ready to boom, hmmm.

Explosion is an art
I know, itīs very smart.
You are that what I hate,
be destroyed is your fate.
No person is my mate,
only mate si my bomb what I create.

Be ready to the blast,
I hope you whatching,
itīs gonna be fast.

Iīll recreate this world,
listen to my word,
I donīt need any sword.

I am gonna smash everything
until stay nothing.
Iīll make new place,
where will live only my race.
Yeah, itīs just me what I think,
hmmm, I can hear that zing.

Fire and explosion everywhere,
stupid people are nowhere.

This is my dream,
you know what I mean...hmmm.

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Post by Lillzeirell on October 9th 2013, 5:25 pm

nice, sound like a good lyrics, now sing Smile 

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Post by Hiei on October 10th 2013, 6:20 pm

Its more like a rap.

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Post by Rhino.Freak on October 11th 2013, 7:07 am

its a nice rap but it took a goodie poetic turn somewhere which doesn't suit diedara! anyways I like the work +1

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Post by narutouchiha on October 18th 2013, 9:46 pm

is a poem or is rape
looks like Eminem needs a writter

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